我的英文小詩

這學期英文課我覺得最有趣的是學做英文詩，全部五行，第一行一個字(為名詞，亦即主題)，第二行兩個字(形容詞，形容主題)，第三行三個字(動名詞，形容主題的動作)，第四行四個字，形容你對主題的感覺，第五行則是主題的同義字，或是以另一種方式描述主題。

老師的例句:
Sun
Hot,fiery
Shining,burning,rising
It lights my life
Yellow star


Mother
Sweet,funny
Loving,caring,helping
She makes life easy
Great love


我的小詩:
Baby2
Terrific, fantastic
Smiling, crawling, clapping
It  is so wonderful
She's a miracle to me.


Baby1
Sweet,noisy
Clapping, smiling, crying
She makes life interesting
Sometimes angel, sometimes devil


Pencil
Neat, useful
writing, drawing, coloring
I need you everyday
My favoriate study tool.